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Title: Tales of the Second War: The Night Before
Rating: M
Warning:: Brief torture, discussion of rape
Status: Complete
Genre: Romance, Humour, Drama, Angst
Characters: Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Neville Longbottom, Remus Lupin, Ernie MacMillan, Luna Lovegood, Peter Pettigrew, Madeleine Yaxley (OC), Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Voldemort, Draco Malfoy
Pairing: Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, Remus/Hermione, Ernie/Luna, Peter/OFC, Neville/Harry/Ginny, Remus/Sirius
Summary: Spinoff from The Power of Two, taking place during Chapter 11, and looking at what a few other characters are doing on the eve of the final battle. (Spring 1998)

Ron and Hermione

Date: 2007-01-08 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
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Re: Ron and Hermione

Date: 2007-05-05 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saraste-impi.livejournal.com
Oh, it was just marvelous! I giggled muchly, as I think I was supposed to do. Oh, poor them. *giggle* And oh my, must have been my first non-slash HP fic! XD

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Re: Ron and Hermione

Date: 2007-07-03 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rissabby.livejournal.com
Oh dear. They are so not ready. Although, they have good sensible attitudes. Hermione should have done a little more research and brought some firewhiskey.

I've got the movie PoA playing in the background, and I think you've got the voices down very well, especially Ron's.

The other 'noises' they hear are first coming from the floor below and, at the end, are coming from the floor above. I couldn't tell if that was an error or if you meant that they were surrounded by people having sex.

This was sweet and funny and sad. I think it's good for us (adult readers especially) to remember how young these heros are.

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Re: Ron and Hermione

Date: 2007-08-09 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ekaterin24.livejournal.com
Umm, this is so darn honest I...gah. Excellent. Perfectly awkward in the way it's meant to be.

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Re: Ron and Hermione

Date: 2007-09-02 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severusslave-76.livejournal.com
*laughs hysterically* Oh, my -- that was, by far, the most perfect description of first time sex I have ever read. The way you had them both was right in line with their characterizations, and the whole Hermione "I read about" thing had me in hysterics. The love was there too, palatable, right below the surface, and made the amusement of it all tempered a bit by the reason behind the act -- all in all, very nicely done.

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Re: Ron and Hermione

Date: 2007-10-08 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mediate89.livejournal.com
That was NEAT! lol
I would like to hear of a second time, yeah?

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Re: Ron and Hermione

Date: 2009-04-03 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
That was amazing! It made my LOL. A lot. Great writing, perfect characterization! :D x

Re: Ron and Hermione

Date: 2009-09-04 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gosuckonalemon.livejournal.com
Wow, that has got to be the most awkward first time ever. In the history of all mankind.

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Brave

Date: 2007-07-03 04:47 am (UTC)
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Re: Brave

Date: 2007-07-04 10:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malkhar.livejournal.com
Very nice indeed, concise and yet everything's in it.
First time I read a fic about Neville, you make him sound profound.

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Re: Brave

Date: 2007-07-04 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nathaniel-hp.livejournal.com
Ooh, I like this. I am very fond of Neville. And about time for Neville to realise that he is worthy. He deserves it.

I like the Marauder ship references, although I can't really see Remus or Sirius scratching hearts into their headboards.

Now, I would like to know who is with Remus ;-)

In any case, a sweet little story.
Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Brave

Date: 2007-07-04 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clana4-ever.livejournal.com
I loved this, it gave me chills reading it ;D

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Re: Brave

Date: 2007-08-09 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ekaterin24.livejournal.com
This is simply wonderful. Neville is showing true courage--being brave and *alone*.

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Date: 2007-08-31 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lucianwolf.livejournal.com
I don't think a fic has made me cry before. That was beautiful.

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Ready

Date: 2007-07-03 04:48 am (UTC)
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Re: Ready

Date: 2007-07-03 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binzer611.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness...I just read them both, Ready and Awkward, and I loved them! Such a contrast....I laughed so hard at Ron and Hermione, and then the conversation between Ginny and Harry threw me for a loop. I want to know when you'll continue, I need more!! I rarely even ready fanfiction...

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Re: Ready

Date: 2007-07-03 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rissabby.livejournal.com
Typo alert:
I thought I had fantacised every possible aspect... This should be 'fantasized'. Unless it's different in Brit-speak.

Just got a phone call, will have to review later. Ginny wasn't a virgin, right?

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Re: Ready

Date: 2009-07-14 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
really really good. if JK Rowling could put such sexual content in a book, this would have been it. It was very well written--seemed like something right out of a HP book.

And you make it about more than the sex-you used dialogue to show their passion for each other (as cheesy as that sounds.) Well done.

Is there a sequel? Because the last sentence really made me wish there was!

Lucky

Date: 2007-07-03 04:49 am (UTC)
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Re: Lucky

Date: 2007-08-07 11:40 am (UTC)
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That was touching - and oddly hot - and oh that last line just popped my brain! *giggle* Thanks!

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Alive

Date: 2007-08-20 08:17 pm (UTC)
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Re: Alive

Date: 2007-08-20 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiggothy.livejournal.com
Mmm.... I just adore how you capture the characters in the scene and the way you craft your phrases :-) It's wonderfully sweet, but nowhere near sickeningly so, as it could have easily been with a less skilled writer (if that doesn't sound like a backhanded-compliment, because it's really not intended as such! *worries*)

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Fallen

Date: 2007-08-21 05:06 am (UTC)
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Re: Fallen

Date: 2007-08-25 05:09 am (UTC)
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I was skeptical at first, but it was actually rather well written. I like it. ^_^

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Divided

Date: 2007-08-27 02:29 am (UTC)
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Re: Divided

Date: 2007-10-16 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jacedamian23.livejournal.com



"It's a condom, Ron. It goes on your ... you know."

"What?" he asked, baffled.

"Oh, for God's sake, Ronald! It goes on your penis!"

He looked startled for a moment, but warily took the strange object from her and held it up to the candlelight. Doing so, however, did not shed much light on its purpose. "What does it do? It looks uncomfortable. For you, I mean."

"You have to unwrap it," she said, biting back a smile. "It keeps the semen from going in and joining up with the egg."

"Semen?"

"Do we have to go through all the technical terminology?" Her tone now verged on impatience. "You know where babies come from, right?"

"Of course I do." His offended tone suggested that he did not see how this was relevant to the topic under discussion. "The man's potion goes in the woman's -- er -- cauldron, and they -- um -- stir it up and a new life starts."

Hermione could not decide whether to burst out laughing or give up and go back to bed. She stared at Ron in stunned amazement. "No! That's not -- it's because --" She shook her head. "Never mind. You just put this thing on and there's no baby, okay?"

"Okay," he replied uncertainly. "But -- er -- how do I ...?



LMFAO that is so hilarious haha


You think this is something you can learn from books?" Ron asked in amazement.

"Well, why not?" She was defiant now. "Where else am I supposed to learn about it? Not from you, Mr All-I-Know-Is-You've-Got-To-Use-As-Much-Tongue-As-Possible-When-Kissing."

"What's that supposed to mean?" he asked, indignant.

"Just that when you kiss someone, it should be less like choking on a live Flobberworm."

"Oh, that's it! You think I don't know how to kiss?"

Without warning, he grabbed her arm and pulled her to him. His lips were warm and soft yet demanding against hers, and she unconsciously drew towards him.


*snorts* love there banter haa


They're not --"

"Yes, I imagine they are," she said matter-of-factly. "Surely you don't intend to stay a virgin longer than your younger sister?"

"You think she's --?"

lol

"It's rude to stare," he said stiffly.
lol

For a second he opened his mouth to ask, but then decided maybe he did not want to know after all. "Look," he said. "Are you going to show me how to put this concord thingy on or not?"

*snorts* condord thingy haha


For a second he opened his mouth to ask, but then decided maybe he did not want to know after all. "Look," he said. "Are you going to show me how to put this concord thingy on or not?"

lmfao these two are so funny

He squeezed his eyes shut as if he were expecting it to hurt him as well as her, but in fact -

aww he's so cute


wow lucius is really a bastard. i love how narcissa actually cared for draco.
i still didnt see what bad decision hermione had to make
*shrugs*

good story.sad


angela

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Trapped

Date: 2007-09-18 05:46 am (UTC)
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Date: 2008-12-03 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
I am really flattered that you enjoyed my writing style enough to trust me with your own special story. Unfortunately, I just don't have the time to take on another project of that size. I have a backlog of my own fanfic that I keep meaning to finish, and I haven't written anything in months.

I suggest that you give this story a try for yourself. The best way to learn to write and to get over writer's block is to keep trying. The more you write, the more you'll write, and the better it will be. Best of luck with your story!

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