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Title: That Awful Boy
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 6005 (oneshot)
Genre: Drama, Romance, Teen, Het, Smut
Warnings: Underage sex, mind-altering drugs potions
Characters: Severus, Lily, Harlow "Harry" Evans, Rose Evans, Petunia
Pairing(s): Severus/Lily
Synopsis: In the summer before their seventh year, Lily and Severus attempt to renew their friendship with mixed results.
Timeline: August 1977
Disclaimer: I am not J. K. Rowling. I own nothing. Please don't sue me.
Author's Note: This story is dedicated to anyone who remembers what it was like to be seventeen.

Date: 2007-07-09 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slytherykin.livejournal.com
I really like this one. Nothing more useful to add, I just really like it. I keep toying around with the "awful boy" thing too, it makes sense in my head somehow.

Date: 2007-07-10 12:13 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-07-12 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lunawindershins.livejournal.com
OH MY GOD!!! This was the sexiest thing I've ever read in my life. it was PREFECT. I really wish I was lily there. 8D

Petunia was awesome! I loved it all, please, please continue! ( yay for snape/lily!)

Date: 2007-07-12 12:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm not sure that there is any more to that story, but I've written one called There is a War that's a rather dark look at how James and Lily got together, with definite hints toward Snape/Lily, plus one scene involving young Mr and Mrs Dursley.

Date: 2007-07-25 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] holofernes.livejournal.com

So hot. So vivid. So intense. Call me a perv, but I was hoping they would finally make it in the end XD. I guess it ends like it should; sad and realistic. I love it, I really do. I hope you post more about them soon!^^

Date: 2007-07-26 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
Thanks! Is it just me or is this story getting more "air time" now that Severus/Lily is canon? Allow me to say, I KNEW IT!

Date: 2007-07-26 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] holofernes.livejournal.com
But of course! Now that they're canon, many people will begin to wonder why didn`t they notice them before...but you, deep down, will know that...WE SAW IT COMING FROM LOOONG AGO. Maybe this will reboost the fandom for this pairing, which unfortunately has left many stories unfinished *frustrated*. Hopefully, they will feel like continuing them :)

Date: 2007-07-26 11:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
It was sort of frustrating, though, that we got handed almost all the important moments from that 'ship on a plate in the book. As I was reading that chapter, I was thinking, "Are you trying to kill people who write Snape fic, Jo?" She's left us a lot less room to work with.

Date: 2007-07-26 02:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] holofernes.livejournal.com
You're right. Still, we can fill up the gaps between the "big moments". After all, life's not all "big moments", right? And sometimes, the path to those moments is far more interesting than the highlights itselves. (How to get philosophical to avoid frustration XD).

Date: 2007-07-25 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psychrolute.livejournal.com
That was perfect. I definitely loved how Petunia walked in on him and those "potions". x]

Date: 2007-07-26 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm wondering if I should edit the story based on new canon, but I'm thinking maybe not.

Date: 2007-07-26 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psychrolute.livejournal.com
It'd be cool to see, but the story works as is.

Date: 2007-08-08 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deadends.livejournal.com
aww i love it! and with the release of DH its practically canon anyways :P

Date: 2007-08-08 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
Yeah, I wrote it to psych myself up, since I figured that was probably where canon was headed. I'm normally a Regulus/Severus 'shipper. But this was fun, and draws a lot on my own experience of being 17. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-10-08 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morlockiness.livejournal.com
When I first read this on ff.net I thought it was the best piece of fanfiction ever. I still love it.

Date: 2008-12-07 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
Thanks! I may change it a bit at some point to bring it (somewhat) in line with known canon. Or I may not.

Date: 2010-04-23 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hogwartshussy.livejournal.com
Really interesting. I'm impressed with your characterization of Lily and I could see things happening just this way between Sev and Lily. Honestly though, if I walked into what Petunia did when she caught Snape brewing, I'd have screamed the house down. If not immediately, then after he waved his wand and cut her for sure. I made for an absorbing tale though.

Date: 2010-04-23 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pica-scribit.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it. You're probably right about Petunia, though. Creepy little Junior Snape....

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